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Loving Souls

L oving - and safe in your mountain air O how it feels -, lifted high above V anity disappears - with a love so rare I n the apex of loving strength - thereof N aturally cleaving to your arms - with care G iving myself to your towering love S afe within your protecting love O the feeling of love - in the open air U nderstanding - how much you really care L oving - the way I am cradled above S afe in your arms and protected thereof now finding a man such as you is so rare Two souls locked together, uncommonly rare High above the weather, locked in our love Lost in your peaks and your strength thereof Fill my soul with you as my lungs with air You’ve lifted me high and so far above In your strong arms, I am locked in your care No one can harm me, I don’t have a care For a mountain of strength is O so rare Of all the land that you tower above I rest in your arms, your mountain of love Your strength and protection, your manly air Has given me purpose to serve you thereof If the meaning of love is clear thereof Content I rest on your pinnacle of care The breath of your love in the mountain air As a man like you is extremely rare So I’ll keep and serve you in all my love As you are my master and high above So I sit on your apex high above Tending your needs as your woman thereof I give you my soul and undying love And I come to be taken into your care Love like ours is hard to find so uncommonly rare Please hold me close, I will stay in your mountain air I’ll live in your mountain air and stay with you above The bond we found is rare yet we have thereof Give to me your care and I pledge to you my love Author notes This poem is constructed in three forms: acrostic, sestina, and rictameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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