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Loving Life.

Sewing beauty into the seam of reality, perception of the soul is no frivolity, filling each moment with conscious thought, experience each colour the green grass and the ruby of port, excepting others views will only distort, that which is your own fruitful thought, experience the iron which is wrought, be aware of your own actions, each experience is poetry in motion, what’s your intention? To create or destroy, reality is our toy, to abuse or enjoy, becomes irrelevant to greet experience or become shy and coy, the wheel of life spinning like fire poi!

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Date: 4/5/2010 9:12:00 AM
Well done and a lovely read. :) Thanks for all the kind comments too. Glad to see you.
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:32:00 PM
I like this poem "Loving Life". We shouldn't get bog down by reality, it can always be changed. It is in our own hands. Our own thinking and emotions often dictate our life. If negative, they only attract more negativity, etc. Your poem made me think of this. Perhaps on an external aspect, you could cut your lines in the way that the rhymes are at the end. And then again, perhaps you wanted them at the beginning. Just an observation. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/17/2010 4:22:00 PM
life sure can be joyful or painful, great poem!
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:45:00 AM
Lance thank you for your welcome comment today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:34:00 AM
Enjoyed reading . Enjoying life I don't think so. Very well writen words, to go by...Irma
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