Paula Goldsmith Poet Pantoum

Loving Kissing and Cuddling

I love loving all day every day.
Kissing and cuddling makes it all right.
Let's cuddle as we sit by the bay.
Watching the boats until comes the night.



Kissing and cuddling makes it all right. 
Your soft fur I love to rub and rub.
Watching the boats until comes the night. 
I am now hungry let's get some grub.



Your soft fur I love to rub and rub. 
Galloping to the barn to eat oats.
I am now hungry let's get some grub. 
I am hungry I could eat a goat.



Galloping to the barn to eat oats. 
Let's cuddle as we sit by the bay. 
I am hungry I could eat a goat. 
I love loving all day every day. 

#2 Picture: Cat and horse kissing, cuddling and loving. 
Date Written: 4/9/2020

3 Place   Pantoum Rhyme – Personification  Contest Judged:5/9/2020 Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Eve Roper May 9, 2020 at 10:44 PM Congratulations on your win, Paula , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. Great job with the theme you decided to choose. Thank you for your participating in the contest. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith May 11, 2020 at 3:26 PM Thank you, for your note. I am honored with the win. So glad you like it. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day with hugs........

John Watt May 9, 2020 at 6:16 PM Paula, cute story of two lovers getting hungry! Congrats on your win ~ John Paula Goldsmith May 11, 2020 at 3:24 PM Thank You for writing. I did not know I had won. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day.........

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2020 at 8:43 PM Did you put up a picture? I gotta go see it. I did not know it was a picture contest too! Well done, paula Paula Goldsmith April 12, 2020 at 1:12 PM Thank You, for your note. So glad you like it. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day...........

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2020 at 1:58 PM - Much love from our pets ... a lovely poem, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2020 at 11:20 AM Oh! Yes! much love from pets. Glad you like it. Thanks for writing. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............

Arturo Michael April 9, 2020 at 1:45 PM Thank God I'm not a goat...Very affectionate write...full of love...Nice one Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thanks for your note. Yes, thank God you are not a goat, we would miss all of your wonderful poems. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter........