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Loving Alone

down the tears fall up the fears crawl yet i stand tall waiting for loves call but inside i hide because im shy so i hide my love finally watch it fly away like a dove going high above i sit and cry and hope and try to cover it up before he sees how much he really means to me hes all i need id fall to my knee and take his pain and bare without strain and get to my feet and sigh in defeat

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Date: 1/20/2011 6:21:00 PM
I so agree with those words. Sad yet true. I am pleased to have read your poem today. Keep it up my friend.
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:51:00 PM
Loving alone is just like being alone >> nice piece Amber >> James
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Date: 12/15/2009 8:16:00 PM
Never give up or be defeated
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:21:00 PM
I like the vertical feeling this poes gives me. My eyes kept moving up and down while reading it. Well done David
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