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Feb. 4. 2025

Five Lines Short and Sweet Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Oliver Mckeithan

garden blossoms galore tickling and feasting eyes lovely vistas of home and earth green spot. roses dancing in wind maidens clad in bright red. waiting for a lip-to-lip kiss fragrance. small bees blossom's buddies flit around, humming tunes carry the cargo of pollen. reward. carpet of silken grass invites cute lady bugs, in polka dotted dress of red. delight.

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Yann Rolland

Date: 2/4/2025 11:29:00 PM

splendid poem, images are inspiring and peace is beautifully shared, thanks poet

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/4/2025 12:08:00 PM

Dear Valsa such an outstanding Cinquain highlighting the subtle and often overlooked elements found in nature. This enables us to appreciate the intricate and balanced relationships among organisms, flora, and their surroundings through the application of vibrant and dynamic visuals that honor the garden's aesthetic and interrelatedness. Sending you warm hugs and good vibes

Jay Narain

Date: 2/4/2025 10:26:00 AM

The spring has come to your domain. Picturesque portrayal.

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2025 9:34:00 AM

Your cinquain poem is an ode to the small, often overlooked details in nature. It uses lively and vivid imagery to celebrate the beauty and interconnectivity of the garden, encouraging us to appreciate the delicate and harmonious relationships between plants, animals, and the environment. The simplicity of the language, paired with the sensory richness of the descriptions, allows the reader to connect deeply with the natural world, seeing it not only with their eyes but also with their senses and emotions.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2025 6:40:00 AM

Such a pretty photo and pretty poem to accompany it. Even the bees and lady bugs get a nod. So glad you're back in action Valsa

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/4/2025 5:54:00 AM

Hi friend Valsa! This is very lovely, an accomplished pen to be sure. It drew me in to a walking thru! Wonderful anticipation for Spring…….l.Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/4/2025 1:29:00 AM

Dear Valsa, I'm glad you're back with a great poem, too. I wish I were in that garden, where life would be pleasant and peaceful. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2025 11:56:00 PM

Dear sweet valsa, This is so stunning and just breathtaking how youv painted imagery in few syllables throughout! I love especially the last one and also how youve described roses dancing in the wind! So picturesque! Your cinquain deserves a fave!! Best wishes! Sending you light always