garden blossoms galore tickling and feasting eyes lovely vistas of home and earth green spot. roses dancing in wind maidens clad in bright red. waiting for a lip-to-lip kiss fragrance. small bees blossom's buddies flit around, humming tunes carry the cargo of pollen. reward. carpet of silken grass invites cute lady bugs, in polka dotted dress of red. delight.
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