Love-Slain
Metaphors
I just can't find
for that which throbs
inside my chest,
for that which floats
and fills my head;
I just can't figure out
the setting
of my frazzled frame
of mind;
for there's a fog that
slowly swirls
and dims the sun behind
my eyes,
but not the glow of you
in there
in my love-struck,
love-slain heart!
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