Lovesickness

she looks at him with obvious trepidation which overwhelmes her whole being

emotions vanish as swiftly as they come especially when your consumed by insecurities

through stubbornness and blatant disregard she harped on him relentlessly

their conversation was animated in hushed voices as hers bacame venomous

everything has an explanation and a motivation he thought as she nipped at his heels like a 
puppy

thats a fair assumption to conclude she was outta her mind and going crazy over him

she was tough and invincible but love leads to vulnerability which leads to predators which 
causes attacks 

in a parallel univerese this would be ok but this is 2009 and this was getting old

boredom atrophied her mind when she was alone causing her to stalk him on the phone

this was a turning point for both of them someone had to go

she needed to validate her existence and wanting and needing him was how she did it

she finally bacame tired as she regurfitated the same old lost love story over and over again


dissappointment lies between romance and general fiction when your expecting to be in love 
forever!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/26/2009 4:13:00 PM
I think we have all suffered from lovesickness at one point or another, again well written>James
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:47:00 PM
lovesickness--love give your all,but if someone cant see through your beautiful heart,let go of him,plenty of fish in the sea,mind the sharks of course:-),heartfelt disappointment,but after dark skies ,there s the sun shining bright,i believe this always--charma
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:16:00 AM
Great you! i have felt it before This is awesome. Keep writing… this is a lovely poem
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