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Lovesickness

she looks at him with obvious trepidation which overwhelmes her whole being emotions vanish as swiftly as they come especially when your consumed by insecurities through stubbornness and blatant disregard she harped on him relentlessly their conversation was animated in hushed voices as hers bacame venomous everything has an explanation and a motivation he thought as she nipped at his heels like a puppy thats a fair assumption to conclude she was outta her mind and going crazy over him she was tough and invincible but love leads to vulnerability which leads to predators which causes attacks in a parallel univerese this would be ok but this is 2009 and this was getting old boredom atrophied her mind when she was alone causing her to stalk him on the phone this was a turning point for both of them someone had to go she needed to validate her existence and wanting and needing him was how she did it she finally bacame tired as she regurfitated the same old lost love story over and over again dissappointment lies between romance and general fiction when your expecting to be in love forever!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 5/26/2009 4:13:00 PM
I think we have all suffered from lovesickness at one point or another, again well written>James
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:47:00 PM
lovesickness--love give your all,but if someone cant see through your beautiful heart,let go of him,plenty of fish in the sea,mind the sharks of course:-),heartfelt disappointment,but after dark skies ,there s the sun shining bright,i believe this always--charma
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:16:00 AM
Great you! i have felt it before This is awesome. Keep writing… this is a lovely poem
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