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Lovesick Minnesota

I see you over there, nervously playing with your hair blushing at the ground and trying not to stare, so I'm pretending not to care. (Tonight is bright and full of lights.) I still don't care, I'm trying to win you over I'm playing the part, I'm playing fair, but you're gorgeous and distracting ...I'm not getting anywhere. So don't trust me when I'm love sick just carry me on through. It doesn't matter where I end up if I'm ending up with you. I'll hold you tighter when your cold girl I know how seasons do. Warmer hearts in Minnesota when it's negative two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/3/2013 5:03:00 PM
Nice poem, Patrick. I felt the honesty, and passion. Well written. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out my poems, might find one you like.
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Date: 7/9/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thank You!

Book: Shattered Sighs