Lovesick

Let me
Off of this ship that is tossing me
Violently
Eyes are not serving me
Still I look longingly
I just want someone to
Calm this commotion and
Kill this emotion. I'm lovesick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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December 23, 2025 at 9:07 PM
This was very creative because two genres were used...Both Acrostic and Rhyme. It also made so much sense. Very creative and heartfelt.
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December 23, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Thank you for your comment. Glad to start writing again
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