Loves Wonder

Aye but my love for you full of wonder
Sighting your face, my heart full of thunder
Your skin feels like mine, more tender and thin
Your eyes my surprise, love journey begins
My mind deceives, what my senses behold
Each time I touch you, a story unfolds
Lightning strikes, expectations unforeseen
For you in the flesh outstripping my dreams

Strange it would seem, I see only your smile
As the words from your lips, journey a while
Mesmerized beauty, is all I can see
Anesthetized wonder, blinds like the bee
Joy in your presence confounding my style
Love it keeps pounding my heart like a child
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 2:46 PM
a great poem.so much wonder in love thats true, i like how you use a child's in with it. -always&forever lynette
Hickman Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 12:17 AM
yes the wonder of it still sends receivers of it in circles and more,,,Great Italion Sonnet,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..cecil
Sweetheart Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:05 PM
Are we so in luv David dear? this is so lovely and u seem captured in every line.. awesome as always... my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Delacroix Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Beautiful write and original in its expression. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Devonshire Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 6:31 AM
Feeling the excitement and wonder as beauty casts its spell is one of the most pleasurable experiences we can have, David. Such beautiful thoughts on falling hard for someone who keeps your heart "pounding." Wonderul poem, David. Thanks for sharing. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:18 AM
A well penned Italian sonnet with apt rhyming.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 1:24 AM
:You captured wonder in your poem, David! thanks for reading my poem tonight. LUv, andrea
A  Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 10:55 PM
LOVE IS SWEET NO MATTER THE FORM, LOVED IT, SKAT
A   Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 9:53 PM
love has no boundaries, no limits, and no answers. Well done on the poetry wonders of love,..p,d,
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