Loves Tune

field full of sunshine
wafting smell of spring flowers....
indents of loves tune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:49 PM
'Indents of loves tune' Wonderful line there.
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Hello Jeremy nice to see you, glad you liked one of my lines. .....Seren
Horsman Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 3:39 PM
wonderful, visual, and the last line perfect for the imagination,,,just love this....
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Thank you Harry...Seren
Susan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 12:36 AM
very pretty :)
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Susan....Seren
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Fresh and lovely! Perfect 575 meter and gorgeous imagery. Well done indeed!! Best wishes, Keith
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Keith....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 12:06 AM
so full of spring!!
Roberts Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 9:34 PM
Thanks Andrea ...Seren
Sivey Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Another meadow inspired write my friend! I love it! This is a beautiful poem Seren! What a fantastic piece, Great work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:00 AM
thanks again Russell...Seren
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