Hello There Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Love's Sweet Torment

Tormented by angelic words,
you softly, swiftly seal my fate;
is it too late
to rise from ash and vision blurred?
For these immortal ties
were realized when my gaze met your eyes.

If you so choose, my heart is yours
and ever it will always be ~
eternally.
I always knew this life held more;
His will and ours combine
to forge a Love that stands the test of time.

And thou dost knowest my soul’s dreams
for thy soul hungers for the same;
burden nor blame
shall haunt nor tear these golden seams
conjoined in His delight;
each stitch will reinforce Love’s worthy plight!




*a piece from my past, slightly revised ;)

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Vijay Pandit September 18, 2019 at 7:02 AM Love, longing, and devotion blended in splendid upbeat words..the last stanza makes the case for eternal love. Hello There September 18, 2019 at 11:23 AM Thank you for your wonderfully uplifting comments <3

Chris Green September 18, 2019 at 6:55 AM Tormented by angelic words maybe but none should be tormented by your poetic words, they always flow so beautifully. Hello There September 18, 2019 at 11:21 AM Thank you so much, Chris ~ for all of your encouragement. I really appreciate it.