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Love's Sweet Torment

Tormented by angelic words, you softly, swiftly seal my fate; is it too late to rise from ash and vision blurred? For these immortal ties were realized when my gaze met your eyes. If you so choose, my heart is yours and ever it will always be ~ eternally. I always knew this life held more; His will and ours combine to forge a Love that stands the test of time. And thou dost knowest my soul’s dreams for thy soul hungers for the same; burden nor blame shall haunt nor tear these golden seams conjoined in His delight; each stitch will reinforce Love’s worthy plight! *a piece from my past, slightly revised ;)

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Date: 9/18/2019 7:02:00 AM
Love, longing, and devotion blended in splendid upbeat words..the last stanza makes the case for eternal love.
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Date: 9/18/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderfully uplifting comments <3
Date: 9/18/2019 6:55:00 AM
Tormented by angelic words maybe but none should be tormented by your poetic words, they always flow so beautifully.
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Date: 9/18/2019 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris ~ for all of your encouragement. I really appreciate it.

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