From the pleasure of your soul, I glow Through starlight... a kiss, my gaze can't forego And dawn approaches upon us to bring Soft caress of air into me shall blow 'The darkened skies stole my tears'...to you, I cling. Chorus: Dearest , somehow my fervent life you hold Breathless as my heart beguiled... takes a leap, Then tame me now, let all demands unfold Tame me now within an affection deep. ~ There are no longer tears, we wander sweet, Enchanting our eve its heavenly treat-- That pulses heat when charmed laughter peals Warmer a slow dance, my yearning complete Tender the gaze, the kiss… our joys replete. 4th place
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