Charlie Smith Poet Free verse

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Love's Spring

her love
     was no less tender
     than the first bloom of spring

     teardrops on her cheek
     glistened like morning dew

     I wondered...
     how is it possible that I am 
     the only one that noticed

     what more could she be to me

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Maria Williams March 29, 2017 at 8:15 AM Nicely written Charlie, thanks for sharing. Charlie Smith March 29, 2017 at 8:34 AM Thank you Maria...

Michael Bell March 27, 2017 at 1:41 PM Few words with a powerful message - love it Charlie Charlie Smith March 27, 2017 at 11:22 PM Thank you Michael. I'm not sure how to label this form, but it's one I want to expand and explore.

Tatianna Leachet March 27, 2017 at 7:01 AM This was beautiful and very nicely written. Its very captivating :) Charlie Smith March 27, 2017 at 11:25 PM Thank you Tatianne, it's one of my favorites and I hope continue on this theme...

Running Wolves March 22, 2017 at 12:33 AM Very nicely done, a most awesome write. I believe we are very closely on the same page. I really like this. Charlie Smith March 22, 2017 at 7:58 AM Thank you Robert...

Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 3:35 PM You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words and brings out the emotions. Emile Charlie Smith March 20, 2017 at 8:38 PM Your encouragement is so well received, thank you Emile...

Pashang Salehi March 20, 2017 at 12:31 AM You are one of the lucky ones... You have found it... Charlie Smith March 20, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thank you Pashang, I have...

Edward Mccall March 19, 2017 at 4:36 PM This is a very beautiful piece Charlie thank you sir for sharing. Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 6:38 PM Thank you for your kindness Edward...

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2017 at 3:36 PM wow, this is so lovely, Charlie. One of your best. SEVEN Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 6:37 PM So glad you liked it Andrea...

Pandita Sietesantos March 19, 2017 at 3:18 PM Such a lovely piece - touching and captivating! Love it, Charlie! Pandita Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 6:36 PM Thank you Pandita...

Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2017 at 9:20 AM Love this! Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 9:55 AM Thanks Richard...

Ravi Sathasivam March 19, 2017 at 3:06 AM Excellent and very romantic write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 7:44 AM Thank. You Ravi...

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 18, 2017 at 3:28 PM Astute observation, Charlie. Gorgeous poem and pic. A true romantic you are. Splendid poem, my friend. Love and peace to you always. Charlie Smith March 18, 2017 at 9:26 PM Thank you for your kindness Freddie...

Wendy Rycroft March 18, 2017 at 2:06 PM Wow great Charlie xx great one x Charlie Smith March 18, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thanks Wendy...

CayCay Godwin March 17, 2017 at 11:12 PM The read was like being inside your alert emotional and sensitive imaginings - very unique and impressive. So few words, so very deep, Charlie! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Charlie Smith March 18, 2017 at 10:35 AM You are so generous CayCay, thank you...

Arthur Vaso March 17, 2017 at 7:15 PM I really loved this, and that last line, so nice! :) Charlie Smith March 17, 2017 at 9:54 PM Arthur it means so much to read your note, thank you...

Jan Allison March 17, 2017 at 6:08 PM oh so romantic Charlie this is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx Charlie Smith March 17, 2017 at 9:55 PM Thank you for your kindness, it means so much...

Lynn Marie March 17, 2017 at 6:03 PM ...love is in the air:-) ...the last line is so full of promise. beautiful writing :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn Charlie Smith March 17, 2017 at 9:58 PM Lynn, I feel really close to this one. I hope you feel what I mean...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2017 at 3:33 PM - Lovely written, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith March 17, 2017 at 9:59 PM Love to you Anne-Lise...