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her love was no less tender than the first bloom of spring teardrops on her cheek glistened like morning dew I wondered... how is it possible that I am the only one that noticed what more could she be to me

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Date: 3/29/2017 8:15:00 AM
Nicely written Charlie, thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/29/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Maria...
Date: 3/27/2017 1:41:00 PM
Few words with a powerful message - love it Charlie
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Date: 3/27/2017 11:22:00 PM
Thank you Michael. I'm not sure how to label this form, but it's one I want to expand and explore.
Date: 3/27/2017 7:01:00 AM
This was beautiful and very nicely written. Its very captivating :)
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Date: 3/27/2017 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Tatianne, it's one of my favorites and I hope continue on this theme...
Date: 3/22/2017 12:33:00 AM
Very nicely done, a most awesome write. I believe we are very closely on the same page. I really like this.
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Date: 3/22/2017 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 3/20/2017 3:35:00 PM
You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words and brings out the emotions. Emile
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Date: 3/20/2017 8:38:00 PM
Your encouragement is so well received, thank you Emile...
Date: 3/20/2017 12:31:00 AM
You are one of the lucky ones... You have found it...
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Date: 3/20/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Pashang, I have...
Date: 3/19/2017 4:36:00 PM
This is a very beautiful piece Charlie thank you sir for sharing.
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Edward...
Date: 3/19/2017 3:36:00 PM
wow, this is so lovely, Charlie. One of your best. SEVEN
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:37:00 PM
So glad you liked it Andrea...
Date: 3/19/2017 3:18:00 PM
Such a lovely piece - touching and captivating! Love it, Charlie! Pandita
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Pandita...
Date: 3/19/2017 9:20:00 AM
Love this!
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Date: 3/19/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Richard...
Date: 3/19/2017 3:06:00 AM
Excellent and very romantic write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/19/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thank. You Ravi...
Date: 3/18/2017 3:28:00 PM
Astute observation, Charlie. Gorgeous poem and pic. A true romantic you are. Splendid poem, my friend. Love and peace to you always.
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Date: 3/18/2017 9:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Freddie...
Date: 3/18/2017 2:06:00 PM
Wow great Charlie xx great one x
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Date: 3/18/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Wendy...
Date: 3/17/2017 11:12:00 PM
The read was like being inside your alert emotional and sensitive imaginings - very unique and impressive. So few words, so very deep, Charlie! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/18/2017 10:35:00 AM
You are so generous CayCay, thank you...
Date: 3/17/2017 7:15:00 PM
I really loved this, and that last line, so nice! :)
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:54:00 PM
Arthur it means so much to read your note, thank you...
Date: 3/17/2017 6:08:00 PM
oh so romantic Charlie this is absolutely beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness, it means so much...
Date: 3/17/2017 6:03:00 PM
...love is in the air:-) ...the last line is so full of promise. beautiful writing :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:58:00 PM
Lynn, I feel really close to this one. I hope you feel what I mean...
Date: 3/17/2017 3:33:00 PM
- Lovely written, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:59:00 PM
Love to you Anne-Lise...

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