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Love's Sonnet

Love’s Sonnet Tattered womb, shred by sharp blades of regret, Weighed down by rough millstones, dark as shame, Pale dawn stumbles from midnight to forget - Stinging acids scar through showers of blame. A whisper of consolation murmurs, Infused with the incense of compassion, A harbinger of enchanted grace demurs Spellbound, purified enigmas refashioned Love, like a lyric – a lady in waiting – Steps out of ebony’s clinging shadows Releasing hard night with nightmares abating The pall of shrouds rent by empathy’s glow. The chivalry of love – a silk caress – Eternal perfection, fulfills love’s quest.

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Date: 5/29/2024 10:38:00 PM
Lovely poetry. I especially enjoyed stanza 3
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Date: 5/29/2024 7:58:00 PM
Gorgeous and lovely, truly...you said what needed to be said, a beautiful sonnet
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Date: 5/29/2024 12:06:00 PM
The sad and horrific images of a shattered life, but love with hope shines through. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:48:00 AM
Dear Sam, What a breathtaking journey through pain and redemption, beautifully inked with exquisite imagery and profound emotions. I love how each line is a testament to your mastery of language and depth of feeling. Your ability to capture the complexities of love and transformation is truly remarkable. Bravo on crafting such a moving piece! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/28/2024 6:54:00 PM
Hey Sam sorry I haven't been around much. Your first stanza is heart wrenching but in the end love triumphs. I hope you have a wonderful week
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Date: 5/28/2024 9:51:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme and perfect stresses in your lines. Love is eternal. Loved it.
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Date: 5/28/2024 8:20:00 AM
Hi Sam, and I mean this from the bottom of my heart this is an absolutely stunning write , this is a true poets voice speaking , every line is breathtaking, this is without doubt a favourite, blown away truly . Danny
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/28/2024 9:24:00 AM
Hi Danny! I am just blown away by your wonderful feedback and your fav! What a lovely message to start off the morning - a gift and a blessing! Writing this sonnet became an exploration into a facet of love that had never occurred to me - love on a knightly quest. Like your beautiful message it became a source of joy! Thank you! Sending you blessings and my gratitude!!
Date: 5/26/2024 9:24:00 AM
Your sonnet has great flow and rhyme and it effectively conveys a journey from profound suffering to redemption through the power of love and compassion. The use of vivid and contrasting imagery, coupled with the structured form of the sonnet, enhances the emotional impact and provides a sense of closure and fulfillment.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/28/2024 9:16:00 AM
Greetings, SO! I am indeed humbled and so grateful to you for your amazing reading of this poem. Thank you for seeing the journey and the power of love! It seems to me that love is always on a quest of compassion to find the broken, the hurting, the suffering. I am so glad that came through to you! You have such a perceptive heart and eye for the experience of poetry. Sending you blessings and my gratitude!

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