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Love's Sake

Every simple step I take Every mighty move I make Every colourful cake I bake Every cruel cord I break Is for our life and love’s sake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 11:29:00 PM
This One Is Going Into My Favorites - - - Definitely Written with Advice For Life in Mind. Keep Up The Good Writing Adeleke MoonBee
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:48:00 PM
i agree john...love and nothing else matters....nice poem...and thanks for you very kind comments....apologies for the delay....grrth
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Date: 8/31/2009 2:43:00 AM
This is excellent and thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem. Robert
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:26:00 AM
Very beautiful, short, simple and to the point. I love the alliteration (?) used in the middle words of each line. - Tim
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Date: 8/22/2009 3:24:00 PM
Love is the beginning and the end, Sincerely, Moses
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