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Love's Rhyme

Who is this, Stanger to my eyes, Conveying the truth in this world full of lies, He speaks to me, Where the eyes can't see, and that's in my mind, Can i talk to you? Spend a little time, Work your words with my rhymes, and maybe we can find, A common ground, Feel my rhythm against your sound, Talk to me and you'll see, Im the kind of woman, Who appreciates true beauty, Of man and his mind, Look in my eyes and give me a sign, I feel the power of your words, Dancing with my lyrics you haven't yet heard, But that's ok, We can change all that if you stay, Then maybe we can get away, To a place where your the speaker on my stage, The pen to my page, Full of masculinity, Your the sun in my astrology, As mesmerizing as the stars, You entice me, the greatest by far, So if its alright, You can spend the night, As we connect and get our start, As you speak what lies in your heart, In a trance I listen, to your words alone, I think I may have found, My own love jones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2010 4:41:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. enjoyed..luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tanesha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:16:00 AM
Excellent... You captured my attention from the beginning and kept a grip on me until the conclusion, no break.... Excellent... Well written with many great lines.... Keep em comin'....:JP]
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:03:00 AM
Nice write, so hard to capture this emotion called love. You have accomplished this feat very well.
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