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Love's Retiree

don't love too much; don't love too deep affection must be yours to keep for when you give yourself away you can't go back to yesterday secure the fortress of your heart keep drawbridge up and hide the chart don't let the path to soul be known there's no return once it's been shown be sparing with your proffered love or you will wail to sky above for some will take and never give that's not a way a life to live give out in measure what you get some limits are what you must set, for I have found when I give all, I set myself to take a fall it hurts my soul to very core when I am left here wanting more the love I give must equal be the love that others give to me so this advice take to your heart if you don't wish to fall apart your love keep safe: a treasure store give to the ones there at your door don't love too much; don't love too deep or you will cause your soul to weep love's at its best when it's returned when for its comfort, heart has yearned this sage advice comes at a price my heart was once a sacrifice but what I've learned, I give for free my name, you ask? Love's Retiree! Eileen Manassian

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Date: 11/8/2017 6:49:00 AM
Standing ovation for this marvelous piece! I wanna say something here. I have been in relationships and most of the time felt that I ended up overcompensating! I try to learn from the previous mistakes and then I commit again, inadvertently. Silly silly me...This poem, I feel is meant for the people like me and I am not ashamed of saying this ...hugs all the way for you ~ Redfiery~
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Date: 11/6/2017 4:30:00 PM
These are wise words which flow from life's experiences, Eileen. In this case I have to agree with Richard...I give my all and accept what comes my way. Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2017 9:19:00 AM
You have to be really strong to be able to do that dear. I am not that strong. That's why I have to keep reminding myself. Hugs...I've missed you.
Date: 11/6/2017 2:41:00 PM
I like the humor mixed with angst. For me I choose to love without reserve and let love come back to me if it chooses.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2017 9:20:00 AM
I applaud you, Richard. I guess I just love too intensely. Hugs
Date: 11/5/2017 11:26:00 PM
Beautiful... The only thing that we need is more love...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/7/2017 9:21:00 AM
I couldn't agree with you more, dear. Welcome to my page.
Date: 11/5/2017 4:08:00 AM
Well done, Eileen. Written with honest and wise words! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you, dear. I appreciate the visit. Nothing hurts my heart more than when I find love not reciprocated, whether romantic, filial, or otherwise. Hugs
Date: 11/4/2017 9:05:00 PM
Good write, Eileen. Not sure I agree, but it's a good poem :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, dear. It's Ok if you don't. I only speak from experience. It's good to not someone a priority who has made you only an option, as the saying goes.
Date: 11/4/2017 9:00:00 PM
The flow is so good, I loved the last line! hugs!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, dear! I appreciate your words of encouragement. Hugs
Date: 11/4/2017 6:02:00 PM
wise poetry my friend, give your heart, not your soul to lend...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/5/2017 8:04:00 AM
Yes, dear...I am still trying to internalize this. Hugs to you...

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