Loves Rapture

Loves rapture when you are there in the moment, and it’s perfect , yes your slice, and you're as giddy as a cricket, being overwhelmed by lice, just one word will suffice, paradise. yes Harry H. the past it waits at a distance, and suddenly then returns, thought brings back the instance, love an hate just lightly burns, indeed, it kills the lice:) Don Johnson
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:11:00 PM
I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Don. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 7:42:00 PM
Is it true that crickets and lice have an affinity? Maybe Aussies have it different. Our Canadian lice attack everything and nobody can get rid of them. That makes us lousy!
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Date: 1/25/2012 11:45:00 PM
Had a lice attack in me house....no crickets about...took 3 months to get rid of them ... but then me mind was gone:)
Date: 1/25/2012 6:48:00 AM
people do not always understand, some believe all there are are americans, I love all your verses bubby, you are a lift, when me pants drift, and I belive I shall go gather them, as the intent of that one I writ, love you Bubby, you are so lovely, if I had a cat, that lovely, which they are sneeky so it would never be, yet you and I, if the seas were closer, well, atleast we have eternity. email today, weiiiiird stuff. just your luck, I believe in you.
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Date: 1/25/2012 4:38:00 AM
Well done Don- yes love and hate strong emotions we totter on the edge and wander is it worth it- I am glad the lice got wiped though Hehe : )
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Date: 1/25/2012 2:45:00 AM
Love rapture:love it,Don. Thank you for reading my poem Don,but you have to read it again...It is ONLY english!! - FOOLED YOU???? oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:42:00 PM
another very great piece Don, Russel is right, the love and hate just lightly burns line is fantastic
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:18:00 PM
well, thank heavens you killed the lice at the end of this one. Boy what an image, my friend. And what did Harry have to do with it? He must have said something to inspire you!
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:09:00 PM
you know Russell, you write the best comments on the soup, an not a negative bar, no need to wind your bloody clock, you are a superstar, you rock....
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Date: 1/24/2012 8:46:00 PM
Ha ha, it kills the lice...you crack me up Don, very funny! The poem isn't as light as that line makes it out to be! "...love an hate just lightly burns,..." though it leads us to the killing of the lice, the line in itself is very good! And I agree with that statement very much, cause I've been there at the crossroads of love and hate, and I know what it does to me...it burns!! Awesome Work!!
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