Love's Post Script

The idea of love’s first glance 

Let’s talk the good, the bad, the ugly, and the one…

We build the perfect person as if we have the eyes of God 

This is probably why our perfect love never meets our actual love

Because our idea has no blemishes but love is not perfect

We picture something so flawless when the truth has a natural defect

Love is two imperfect people coming together to create a strength that can be weakened but never broken

Love has many victories but not without the battles

So, don’t get swept off your feet by the ideal significant other that exists in your fantasy’s

And don’t let sweet words talk to you without actions playing the lead role

Always have patience even when you can’t wait

Because if you’re always looking for love it will hide

But, when you are not looking love is watching ready to introduce itself

Stay positive and let the good vibes flow, carpe diem until you see him

Continue to be a gentleman, use your manners, accept responsibility and never defer until you can please her

No post script for this advice needed…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Flaherty Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Loved the line a great all consuming mantra. Be a gentlemen use manners and accept responsibility. Should be number 1 on 21st century updated modern day commandments
Roses Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 12:59 PM
thank you so much for your kind words!
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