Loves Pieces

Loves Pieces

Like discarded shards of glass, the pieces of my heart
Lay in broken disarray since we have been apart
I loved you then, I love you now, what more can I say
Did I hold you much to close, did that push you away

Is it something that I said, something I spoke in haste
Did I hurt you with my words and leave a bitter taste
Perhaps something I did not say that you longed to hear
A kind word or platitude like how much I love you dear

Could it be the way I look.  Perhaps I've changed too much
I'm no longer as attractive and you no longer crave my touch
Or perhaps you just know me so well, you've grown bored by me
Familiarity breeds contempt they say, you don't like what you see

But wait, who said the problems mine, that I'm the one to blame
Who said that I'm the reason that things are not the same
I still have so much to give, my love, my heart, my soul
I'll pick up all the pieces and find someone to make them whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/6/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's "Lost and Found" contest Bob. Love,Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/6/2011 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 9/5/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the "LOST AND FOUND" poetry contest sponsored by Catie Lindsey.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/5/2011 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Caryl
Date: 9/4/2011 8:49:00 PM
Sadly, this happens too much in today's society.Maybe it's always been this way but people part too easily now. I liked the way the poem seemed like pieces that will be put back together in a brighter future. Congrats on your win, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/5/2011 12:08:00 AM
Glad you liked it Andrea. Thanks for the comments
Date: 9/4/2011 9:37:00 AM
Aww, I love this, Bob. I love how you described your lost love and at the last stanza, you gave us optimistic solution. Congrats! Dinda :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/4/2011 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Dinda
Date: 9/3/2011 6:57:00 PM
Awesome write,Bob.Congratulations on your well deserved win..Keep it up mate...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/3/2011 11:59:00 PM
Appreciate your comments olusequn
Date: 9/3/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your wonderful win with this amazing poetry in the contest luv.. enjoy...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/3/2011 11:59:00 PM
Thank you for the kudos
Date: 9/3/2011 2:20:00 PM
Excellent piece of writing and very inspiring end. Congrats on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/3/2011 2:50:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 9/3/2011 1:42:00 PM
hey Bob congrats on your win..David
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Bob Quigley
Date: 9/3/2011 2:51:00 PM
Appreciate it David
Date: 7/13/2011 4:59:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Bob. I have enjoyed reading your interesting writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Carol. Have a great day.
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