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I tossed and turned I couldn't stop thinking About him I opened and closed my eyes I couldn't tell if I was dreaming That he was here I saw him clearly in my mind I kept reaching out to touch him Only just missing I breathed unevenly I felt my heart flutter For him I felt all of this I knew he wasn't even there What if he were? I can't tell what it means I dream about him day and night He follows me I can't focus on anything I don't know what this feeling is He is a mystery I drift off to sleep I see pictures fading In and out I know that they are telling a story I know that it's about him- Him and me I see us walking hand in hand I feel his warm touch Exhilarating We are forever together We can't leave each other's minds We are in love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/14/2009 10:57:00 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to one who fills your head with dreams both "day and night." Great poem, Jen! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2009 6:50:00 AM
This describes the way love is... I can't believe that you found the words to describe it so clearly. Awesome. This is a wonderful piece and so full of happiness, a beautiful way to start my day. Thank you. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/14/2009 6:33:00 AM
this is a sweet poem. i really dig it because you did such a good job of putting down into words the whole feeling that goes along with being in love. for me, that is the hardest thing to put onto paper. thank you! in love, nick
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