Loves Perception

my eyes are closed, 
now i perceive her 
so blindness i crave, 
 rather losing her sight naive 
  
my thoughts blunder, 
truly conscious of her, 
fool i prefer to stay, 
if wisdom cost her 
  
my feelings meet no bounds, 
but in her they all subdue, 
love restless so be, 
to be content only within her 
  
my actions  make no sense 
in her happiness i am comfortable
clown i prefer to be label 
than see her eyes in tear 
  
my words fail to capture, 
her tender beautiful feature, 
i rather wait as a mute spectator
as beauty beg to be define by her 
  
my time live frozen, 
warmth in her as i cuddle, 
i prefer to die here, 
rather from her arms far 
  
death will play foul, 
but our soul in timeless mould, 
as union of true lovers be crowned 
poems of our passion be written down

...rAHUL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/9/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Rahul on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Rahul on your big win in Tavarus's contest .. Is She the One... an amazing poem..so enjoy your sweet victory today.. have a safe and happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 9/1/2009 2:25:00 PM
Nicely intense emotions and romantic! Congratulations on your honourable mention in Trudy's contest!
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Date: 9/1/2009 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on this tender love poem, and placing in Trudy's contest, Rahul !! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/1/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations Rahul on your win in Trudy's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:33:00 PM
Rahul, congratulations on your success in Trudy's contest...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 10:10:00 PM
Rahul, congratulations on placing in my first contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:26:00 PM
and may many more of your poems be written down for all to read... -Alley
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Date: 7/3/2009 6:03:00 AM
Soup mail..
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Date: 6/19/2009 3:56:00 PM
Beautiful love flowing through these words...the last line is terrific..well done.
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