Love’s Octaves

Skin-deep beauty, sure, is an attraction;
Perspectives, yet, must pass beyond the face.
Though fondness can tinge each human action,
Pleasure shouldn't be the goal of life's race.

As buds bloom forth into lovely flowers,
Shouldn't romance pave paths to partnership?
When companionship cools us like showers,
Compassion beads—like honey from combs—drip.

As banks of ponds and lakes of eras break,
And stagnant waters (good and bad) mingle
With streams and brooks in an unending ache...
One's deep divine self does not stand single.

Our wordless words take flight beyond the sight,
Where selfish shadows yield to infinite height.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Volumes Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 6:45 PM
Such truth. The bond between those truly in love is supreme, and if as a bud blooms the path in time leads to love its magic. All others merely called "lovers" lose the luster. Your words are wise, yet formed in a way that is most endearing to the reader.
Alex Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 8:04 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Daniels Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 2:07 AM
Beautiful sonnet. Neat rhymes, excellent ending couplet ~ incisive wisdom articulated > well done, Sir. Blessed be your offerings. Congrats on placement. X.
Alex Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 8:43 AM
I enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..............
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 9:40 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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