Love's Not Lost Like Lust

i'm crying softer then I did before
and it's barely been a few minutes ago
it's harder, it's harder their falling down 
now I'm falling deeply in love now
it's a dream to meet a girl like you
it's a shame I say I love you when you don't say too
i'm so excited to see you everyday
even if you don't feel the same way
you don't even mind me or care about me
but the way we talk, your smile, your laugh, are deeply so lovely
i can't help but stare into your brown eyes
you're so contagiously attractive but stiff like wood
if I could never love you, I couldn't
if I can move on, I know I wouldn't
this is what the american nightmare is like 
but for you, I'd fight all night
i know the difference between best and right
i'm right when I tell you my love I'm not at plight
the remnents left from what you showed me, stay with me
you're the shining star in my heart 
you complete my missing part
and for you I'd count the salt under the sea
i want all of you and I want you to be with me!
but...
i know we're far away from together
and I know you'll never want me, never
i know we can never have a "forever"
you can forget me, but I'll be there for you whenever...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/4/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on being featured. Rhonda Hero
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2010 4:29:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
Login to Reply
Date: 7/3/2010 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2010 11:15:00 PM
"I'd count the salt under the sea"...nice mon
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Ariel. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2010 10:34:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2010 10:23:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/4/2010 3:12:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ariel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2010 5:11:00 PM
Nice expressions on love and lust
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2010 3:46:00 PM
Interesting unrequited love...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad