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Love's Not Lost Like Lust

i'm crying softer then I did before and it's barely been a few minutes ago it's harder, it's harder their falling down now I'm falling deeply in love now it's a dream to meet a girl like you it's a shame I say I love you when you don't say too i'm so excited to see you everyday even if you don't feel the same way you don't even mind me or care about me but the way we talk, your smile, your laugh, are deeply so lovely i can't help but stare into your brown eyes you're so contagiously attractive but stiff like wood if I could never love you, I couldn't if I can move on, I know I wouldn't this is what the american nightmare is like but for you, I'd fight all night i know the difference between best and right i'm right when I tell you my love I'm not at plight the remnents left from what you showed me, stay with me you're the shining star in my heart you complete my missing part and for you I'd count the salt under the sea i want all of you and I want you to be with me! but... i know we're far away from together and I know you'll never want me, never i know we can never have a "forever" you can forget me, but I'll be there for you whenever...

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Date: 7/4/2010 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on being featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:29:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:15:00 PM
"I'd count the salt under the sea"...nice mon
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Ariel. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:34:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:23:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:12:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ariel. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:11:00 PM
Nice expressions on love and lust
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:46:00 PM
Interesting unrequited love...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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