Love's Magic

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Confronting fragile feelings within; pain will inevitably begin. And pride rebuffs attempts to amend, the sins that you stubbornly defend. In a world of shakers and takers, trickery breeds liars and fakers. And fledgling spirits, clipped of their wings; attract trouble and the tears it brings. Doubt devastates your heart with despair; letting uncertainty foul the air. You tell yourself you're not like the rest, yet studying love, you fail its test. Rife with both flattery and deceit; memories are often bittersweet. And blind to the jealousy you bear, it bends the truth; well beyond repair. Fears that fester in shadow and dream; constantly prey on low self-esteem. For in truth, there's nothing more tragic; than a heart bereft of love's magic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/18/2018 9:38:00 PM
Powerful phrases, in particular "In a world of shakers and takers trickery breeds liars and fakers" and "you study love, yet fail every test"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2018 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2017 10:22:00 AM
Hello Emile, it is me again. I just read another one of your poems,Feelings.Feelings are good when a person is happy. Feelings are sad when a person is hurt. As for me I am healing. I enjoyed your poetry.A 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, your comments are always welcome, Emile.
Date: 12/16/2016 7:28:00 AM
Hello Emile, I haven't forgotten you my friend. I've been in and out of poetry soup from time to time working on prose writes for my second book. "Feelings" is another one of your rhyming master specialties for sure!! The tightness and tautness of your verse, matched with the power and force of you poignant imagery -- all make for a most excellent write!! You last two verse drives home the tragedy you speaking of. Outstanding!! SEVEN/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 12/18/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Emile!! And likewise, Merry Christmas and Happy New Years' wishes from Ingrid and me!! Cheers, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Gary, good luck with your book my friend and have a very Merry Christmas, Emile.
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