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Author's Notes: "Love's Magic" portrays a heartfelt message with a true sense of eternal happiness. This Shadorma consists of a six-verse stanza with a syllabication count of 3/5/3/3/7/5 for a total of 26 syllables. Enjoy the magic. (Gary Bateman - November 29, 2018)

Thematic Categories: angel, desire, emotions, heaven, imagery, love, and symbolism.

Love’s Magic 


Heaven sent

with an angel’s kiss—

star-struck now

with passion

all-around you with glee that—

our love’s forever


Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved
November 29, 2018 (Shadorma)

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 6:59:00 PM

Your are a top notch romantic, Gary; it's beautiful to see someone feeling the way that you do about your wife. I have no doubt that it's an eternal love. Well penned.

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/3/2018 8:01:00 AM

Hello MLK!! Many Thanks (as always) for your read and most perceptive comments here. Yes, I freely admit that I am, indeed, a classical romantic. And yes, for sure, I always write them to/about my wife. Eternal Love, yes, for sure!! I do write multi-thematically on most salient issues, problems, etc. But love-romance does top my list every time!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2018 6:56:00 PM

This is just wonderful and romantic, Gary, in such a few words. It's like looking into that special person eyes and know what they're thinking.

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/30/2018 7:07:00 PM

Hello Dear Eve!! Many Thanks for your read here and for your very kind comments. I am very pleased that you enjoyed it. I actually wrote this particular romantic verse for my wife, Ingrid. Best Always, Gary

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/30/2018 5:20:00 PM

Dear Gary, the rapture of eternal love is so beautifully expressed in the magic of your verse. Enchanting poetry, in a wondrous form, with inspiring symbolism that takes my heart and imagination to beyond heaven. Brilliant! Warmest wishes always, Gary... ~Susan

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/30/2018 7:09:00 PM

My divine pleasure always!! I did like how this one turned out for sure. Best!! Gary

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/30/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thank you, Gary, for bringing this exceptional form to my awareness.. your exquisite poem was showcased perfectly in it’s poetic frame.. ~Sue

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/30/2018 5:51:00 PM

Hello Dear Susan, WOW is all I can say here as I read your comment and thoughts regarding my latest Shadorma. I like to vary the different formats I use, of course, depending on the type of poetic theme I choose to undertake. I have gotten hooked, as of late, on using the Shadorma format when working on more concise themes. I know that Nette Onclaud really likes this poetic style too!! Very Pleased you liked the message and symbolism of this poem!! Best Always!! Gary

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2018 12:52:00 PM

awhh, beautifully penned, gary.. i did a contest on shadorma before; this would have won... huggs

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/30/2018 5:20:00 PM

Hello Dear Nette, Many Thanks for your read and very nice comment here!! Yes, for sure, I remember you telling me before about your Shadorma contest. Great to hear that I would have had the winning poem. There are several different poetry formats that I really enjoy doing. And now, the "Shadorma" format is part of that list of favorite formats of mine. I will start sending you a note in the future each time I do one of these. I always enjoy you thoughts too, and enjoy your poetry as well!! Best Wishes, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/30/2018 5:24:00 AM

Inspiring uplifting message of love eternal! Excellently done mein freund Gary!

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/30/2018 5:40:00 PM

Hallo Herr Professor!! Demetrios, Ich bedanke mich sehr fuer deinen Kommentar und Beobachtung!! Yes, I crafted this Shadorma with the notion of an uplifting and positive message in mind. Danke -- noch einmal, und ein schoenes Wochenende wuensche ich!! Best Wishes too from Ingrid!! Best, Gary

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