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Love's Longings

How much of love is longing’s dream A sheltered search to fill a need Peering from beneath the gray of doubt And yet devoid of fear save self A kite-less string attempts to fly Spurred on as scented winds pass by For love is neither string nor kite Nor tinder’s ever-present flame Nor passion’s scathing conflagration She is a touch, this seductress A slightly trembling growl A flash of light through the gray She is a softness etched in stone A hardness willing to be shaped A blending of the needs of now She is an ever-changing dream A feather caressing an anvil A chisel softly shaping a heart For if love is not our longing’s dream Why sleep amid the tinder and flame Whispering “I love yous” to the wind

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Date: 10/5/2024 9:00:00 AM
John, SO many personified qualities you've given to love's longing, and all quite poetically in opposition to each other, which makes them all the more magical. My faves are "a softness etched in stone" and the last three lines. Beautiful.
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