Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

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Two individuals from a different world

They see each other several occasions

And each time the guy observes her and pays

close attention to every detail.

Though being the shy guy that he is,

small conversations proceed and due to the

little time that they have he discovers that she's special!

Loves' Letter To Brown Sand

On the outskirts
of a line comprised 
of two landscapes;
The distinction
is lost on how you've
managed to captivate me.
Afar, my pupils study
you several times over;
succeeded by dry run 
thoughts yearning
to be verbalized.
Words escape me
walking on tiptoes,
holding on the possibility
that if heard, they 
stumble not to the fore
of inexistence. Due to
clocks power, a measure
of petite conversations formulate
in between. My aroused pupils
correlate with yours...(SIGH) Your
soul accompanied by the brown sand you're comprised of
is indeed...


Exquisite.


Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT

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Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 12:19 AM Wow I can never compare to this I'm lost in your words!;) Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 12:04 PM Hugs!!!! Thank you :)

John Fleming August 20, 2016 at 6:51 AM Very charming, Pace...Really quite lovely - An undoubted seven! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john Pace Ink-U-Script August 20, 2016 at 9:27 AM A great pleasure indeed to have you stop by...please don't be a stranger.

Jaquay Atkins August 10, 2016 at 9:12 PM Thank you for showing love on my page and I'm really vibing to this one

Br3e K. R. June 30, 2016 at 4:31 AM Beautiful

Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 10:36 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Wilma Neels October 12, 2014 at 1:30 PM What to echo your ending here, exquisite comes to mind Pace ;) enjoy the weekend and I hope you are doing good. Its been a while..

Pandita Sietesantos September 29, 2014 at 2:45 PM Beautiful, beautiful piece! How lovely and romantic! Well done my friend! Pandita

Kenisha Shines September 6, 2014 at 4:57 AM you write such beautiful poems and its always pleasure reading them,i just love your writing.happy weekend.