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Love's Last Call - Triplet

Whenever he reeks of alcohol
I know he’s been on an angry crawl
To flush away heartache’s waterfall


8/14/11

Received 3rd place in "Triplet" contest

angstlost loverecovery from...terzanelle

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Dinda Minardi

September 7, 2011 at 11:19 AM

I love the hearache's waterfall! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

August 17, 2011 at 6:22 PM

Thanks for your kind comment on my ode, Susan. It's a true story and the newspaper staff had fun with the cartoon. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

August 16, 2011 at 1:52 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Susan : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 16, 2011 at 7:52 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

August 16, 2011 at 5:14 AM

Congratulations on your win, Susan. This is truly a deserving poem! Enjoyed it thie second time I read it just as much as the first time. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2011 at 12:10 AM

Hey, I am seeing down here that you got a third place. Awesome, Susan! Congratulations. A unique topic too!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 15, 2011 at 11:15 PM

Congrats Susan on a tremendous third place win in this contest.. wonderful words luv..

John Freeman

August 15, 2011 at 11:12 PM

Great to see your poem honored a third place Susan. Great to see your worthy poem honored. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

John Freeman

August 15, 2011 at 11:10 PM

Great to see your poem honored a third place Susan. Great to see your worthy poem honored. Way to Go! Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 15, 2011 at 9:26 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Susan

Randy Biffany

August 15, 2011 at 5:57 PM

I'm sorry you didn't like, enoy or "get" my poem, but I do like your's. I appreciate your feedback and know I need to edit, revise and delete some, but have been busy. Perhaps this is one I should eliminate. Biffany

Jack Horne

August 15, 2011 at 2:46 PM

Yes, there are many people like this, sadly. Insightful write, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

August 15, 2011 at 1:29 PM

Some people do think alcohol will drown their sorrows, but it doesn't work when I try it. Only makes me sadder. Excellent terzanelle, Susan. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn