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Love's Journey

Love’s Journey Cherry blossoms floated pink Concocting love in a drink The day we met… Holding time upon the brink (Future and the Past in sync) As in a net We drank the love with each blink And passing glance—scared to think Of it—and yet, Licking hands of time were set Devouring with regret, The morning dew… But with each dance, somehow, let Blossom, love, and passion get Entwined anew And there drink—‘less we forget In noon day sun—when we met— How blossoms flew. Now as stars on purple hue Contrast pinks for me and you And petals fall… A comet hails from the blue Regaling the love we knew— A fireball— Bright hot blaze, still burns for you, Held in time’s conundrum flue… You’re still my all. deborah burch© 07/24/2012

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Date: 8/19/2012 1:37:00 PM
This poem has love written all over it, Im quite young but hope to find someone who makes me feel this way. Love this poem!
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:57:00 PM
congrats on your win Deb
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:36:00 PM
Fabulous, Deb!! Passionate, Romantic, just love it... congrats on your wonderful win (much higher on my list) Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:34:00 AM
Love this Deborah!!!Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a lovely poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:37:00 AM
A colorful winning poem - congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:20:00 AM
daintily crafted, deborah.... applause to you for the win!..: huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:49:00 AM
congratulations on this super win Debs xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:20:00 AM
Cap'n Deb, huge congrats on your win, the flow of this is just wonderful, as well as the message, well done...David
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:56:00 AM
Enjoyed this one another good one deb xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/24/2012 10:00:00 AM
:) Thank you ~GG~ love you...hope all is well ...miss you...deb
Date: 7/24/2012 9:48:00 AM
Very passionate poem here by you Deb!Enjoyed very much!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/24/2012 9:50:00 AM
;) thank you dear Kash!!(for everything) love ya, deb
Date: 7/24/2012 9:37:00 AM
smitten by the blaze of your images, deborah... gawdd, i like the treatment of your theme.. wow!..:) huggs!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/24/2012 9:51:00 AM
Oh Nette!! thank you sooo very much!!! you bring tears to my eyes with your kindness...love you bunches...deb

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