Love's Innocence

Love’s Innocence

If eyes could only look one time on love’s clear continence
By humble brook of babbles waters
By moss covered morning rocks
To watch you seated on the moist surface
And pass your hand across the moving water’s grain   
To see you and all your purity designed by God
And as for me with my precious luck
Enough to pass this spot by chance
To witness such beauty to exist like this
And with all of nature to explore the glory of such innocence
A moment captured in eternal bliss
Love’s mystery

Created on 5/11/15 for “When Love Was Innocent”- Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Justin Bordner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 5:57 AM
Oh, this is unique and lovely...A 7 . Congratulations on your win, Earl! My bad for being so late. Still catching up with my reading.
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May 28, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Hi Kim. Thank you so much. You are not bad. I am bad. I have been too lazy and preoccupied these days with trivial matters and have neglected the really important things in life. Poetry is a very important matter. I really enjoyed your creation for this contest. Congratulations on your win and very sweet poem. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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May 19, 2015 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations Earl..'
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May 20, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Hi Joe, Thank you so much for commenting. I hope you enjoyed my creation. Have a great day. Earl
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May 19, 2015 at 9:29 AM
EARL:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
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May 11, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Breathtaking scene you ve created with your words Earl... loved it .. wish u best for the contest... nadiya
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May 11, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Hi Nadiya, Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation of my creation. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
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