Loves Grip-Collab

With a whispering sigh, I feel your kiss caress my lips My heart begins to race, as I place my hands on your hips Longingly my body craves, the gentle touching of your fingertips Touch me here, touch me there, Moaning softly I feel your hands begin to slip Across my neck and down my back, Enjoying the frenzy as our clothes rip Onto the bed we slowly lay, You the ocean, and I the ship Beads of passion begin to cascade, As we are joined together on this climactic trip Our quickened hearts both beat as one, Infused together in loves most fierce grip
An arousingly poetic collab with the one and only Germaine Pasley ;)) 6/16/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 12:02 AM
Great collab. You guys worked very well, like the ocean and a ship. ; ) Amazing words and passionate pen. Awesome job to both of you! Always, Laura
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Very passionately penned, loved it, blessings,Carl
Lu Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 5:35 AM
how you like my Grandsons opinion on MeeMaw kissin anyone but him.
Lu Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 5:30 AM
marriage must be a true blessing. fraid I'm too old to start that stuff now hahaha. Missed you Dan, hope you and Yours are doing well as well as the family, becareful, writes like this, you could get a new addition ;) ya just never know. :)
Wesley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:47 PM
I never cease to be amazed Dan, you take us places no one would want to miss. A steamy write that gyrates in so many different directions! Keep on, I'll never get tired! Love, Lizzie
A   Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Dan, wow..... it's like reading a TNT..poem... kaboom... i love the fiery grip... a wonderful collaboration,,,pd
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:03 PM
lol...Thank you :o)
Britt Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:01 AM
MMMMMHMMMMM.... this is STEEEEEAMY <3
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:13 AM
:o) Glad you enjoyed it!
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:23 AM
dan, loaded with subtle, sensual imagery, almost symphonic to the senses... cheers to you and germaine... i'm blown away!..:) huggs!
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. :o)
Cooper Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:55 PM
great pen Dan.
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:05 AM
Thank you,Lisa :o) But I couldn't have done it with out Germaine....
Fields Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Very commendable and so you! It is indeed a pleasure to read your work.. Keep the write-^Up! Up! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I am going to recommend this one even though all of your poetry are my favorites...
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Ha,ha Thanks Gary..Glad you enjoyed.
Salama  Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 4:09 AM
Sensuous and beautiful Dan! A gem ...Samia
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:02 AM
It is a bit steamy.... :o) Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:46 AM
well, you did a great collab with Germaine. Steamy for sure.
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Steamy indeed! :o)
Sanderson Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 10:11 PM
"Steamy, and stupendous I gazing write here Dan, great collaboration once again....Carma"
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Thank you,Carma...Glad you enjoyed it!
Song Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:55 PM
I admire u--I could never do a collab like this one...way too intense...Great romantic piece, Dan. Have a wonderful Father's Day weekend. :) Gwendolen (who is blushing big time!)
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Ha,ha..As Gwendolyn said, I also got a little flusted myself... :o) I Loved writing it!
Elliott Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 10:26 AM
LOL Gwendolyn i must admit i did get a little flustered as we were soup mailing back and forth! i'm pretty sure i blushed red almost the whole time...however it was so worth it because this is on epic poem that has become a favorite of mine!
Song Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Great job Germaine too
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Yikes...this was awesome...love the imagery and how I was drawn in!!! :)
Kearley Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:13 PM
Thanks alot Pace,It was a bit steamy to write!...haha
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 5:43 PM
A deep love affair in a beautiful love poem. - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise
Kearley Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 6:11 PM
I'm glad you liked it. :o) Well I hope you liked it? f.e.f.oxox
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