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Loves First Blush My Reply

Hush my sweet petal, hush, Thine experience that causeth thou cheeks to flush; Is the titillation of loves first blush. Thou beauty causeth mine heart to pound. To shaketh it foundations leaving mine legs unsteady on the ground, Walk yonder, then hitherto me. Filleth mine eyes with thy beauty of thee, Mine lips shape thy vowels of thine name But mine voice feareth to spoil it in this adulterous game Oh my dearest Lisa to love thee would be a carnal feat But thine and mine love would be a sweet sinful treat For Lisa Hiatt not as good as yours. Icannot believe I didn't rhyme one of the lines. I have to rewrite it :-(

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2011 3:57:00 PM
Could you write one for me Sid, I'm fascinated.
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:09:00 PM
Hey you, carmel stuff....
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:12:00 PM
okay now I'm blushing from my red roots to my pink toe nails. lol thank you for this great pen
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