Love's Fault - Contest

Heart
     Racing
     Erratic
     Out of control
     Love
     Heightened
     Libido
     Release slows down
     Heart


Penned 22 October 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sivey Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:07 PM
This is totally awesome my friend! You have written a lovely and ingenious poem Seren! I surely loved reading this magnificent piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:51 PM
thx Russell, was fun to write ..Seren
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Very lusty and lovely, Seren
Roberts Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:51 PM
lol thanks Ram
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