Love's Expression

Her face turned, the lips smiled
Her eyes closed, and also cried
Tears of joy but not sorrow
They are sure to flow....

It was her first received proposal
A true man who was made to fall
For her love and not of her hands'
That were not proper making her handicapped
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Jordan Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Meghamala, this is quite good! Omg and your only 13?! Keep the pen moving!!!:)
Chakraborty Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 5:46 AM
I am so glad you commented so beautifully. I feel inspired to write more. Will surely follow your advice and keep my pen moving.
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September 1, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Hello everyone! I request all of you to leave a comment about my poem so that I can come up better works. I am 13 years old and really require to understand about what others feel about my poem. So do leave your comments to help me come up with better ones the next time??
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