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Love's Expression

Her face turned, the lips smiled Her eyes closed, and also cried Tears of joy but not sorrow They are sure to flow.... It was her first received proposal A true man who was made to fall For her love and not of her hands' That were not proper making her handicapped

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Gabrielle Jordan

Date: 9/19/2018 3:49:00 PM

Meghamala, this is quite good! Omg and your only 13?! Keep the pen moving!!!:)

Meghamala Chakraborty
Date: 9/20/2018 5:46:00 AM

I am so glad you commented so beautifully. I feel inspired to write more. Will surely follow your advice and keep my pen moving.

Meghamala Chakraborty

Date: 9/1/2018 8:55:00 AM

Hello everyone! I request all of you to leave a comment about my poem so that I can come up better works. I am 13 years old and really require to understand about what others feel about my poem. So do leave your comments to help me come up with better ones the next time??