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Love's Drowning

over waves of the sounds from the glass of the sea comes a shreak that dispersed on a night that was cursed and flys cold with a chill; it lands squarely on me my eyes did turn quick and wonder about crystal pale blue was the scenes only hue hand to my head, filled now with doubt but was there distress on that morn i awoke? with the sands at my feet; on an air crisp with sleet as the autumn sun's light had not yet full broke the question that's posed in these ramblings you'll see for she lay down beside during moonlight's high tide why that night my love left, n'er a word spoke to me?

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Date: 9/30/2013 10:21:00 AM
Another beautiful, awesome write, Samuel. Only thing: make sure to change "shreak" to "shriek" (I'm sure it was just a typo). I love your work; I do wish you would post more :)
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