Loves Depth

My love comes to me in the night, she holds me close to her I feel the excitement in her breath, as I hold her to my chest Our lips meet in a kiss, to steal our battered breaths away. One on one, our bodies seal, til the break of dawn. But, always, when the first star shines, my lover comes to me. Our hearts are one, forever embraced, through eternity. We heal each other, kiss to kiss, our love forever true. With each touch, a total bliss, felt only by a few

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/31/2012 2:10:00 PM

Great poem Rollo. Wonderfully penned.

Rollo West
Date: 12/31/2012 4:24:00 PM

Hello Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2012 9:33:00 PM

Great little poem with a great title to match it!

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 11:36:00 PM

Hello dear friend, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/30/2012 8:28:00 AM

Very blessed! Love it, Rollo :)

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 3:23:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Len Gasun

Date: 12/30/2012 7:14:00 AM

This is so beautiful and so sweet my dear friend. I love it and had enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Stopping by to wish you a happy New Year! love/hugs, Leonora

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 3:22:00 PM

hello leonora, thank you so much for stopping by my friend. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/29/2012 9:40:00 PM

Wow, this is such a passionate and emotionally charged write my friend! I truly loved reading this phenomenal poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, a stupendous write Rollo, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/29/2012 9:41:00 PM

Hello my friend and thank you so much for your gracious comments. Rollo