Love's Debris

All that I am, was and ever will be,
you'll find written in verses by my hand.
You may never completely understand
the depth, breadth and heart of me
unless you look beyond love's debris.


June 2, 2022
Bite Size Poem No. 45 Contest
Sponsor:   Line Gauthier
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Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Charming, Jenna ~ congrats
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Thank you.
Peck Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Beautiful! ...beyond love's debris ~ wonderful! congratulations on first place!
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Thanks for the congrats and a second visit, Ann.
Calasibetta Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A very poignant write….stunning. :)Paulette
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Thank you so very much for your thoughts, Paulette.
Peck Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:42 PM
That's beautiful, Jenna! Congratulations on your win!
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:25 AM
Thanks a lot, Ann.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:36 PM
To really know a poet is to read their poetry. Lovely Jenna. Congratulations on your First placement! Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:25 AM
What a thoughtful comment, Connie. It made me smile. Thanks so much!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Wonderful" write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:25 AM
Thanks very much, Paula.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Jenna, those words you wrote are deep and meaningful… Belle
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:24 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed them, Belle. Thanks.
Alex Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 8:42 PM
One should look beyond love's debris. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Yes, and thank you, Chris.
Canerdy Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 6:27 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jenna. Janice
Logan Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Thanks, Janice.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 5:09 AM
A delicious bite size poem, elegant! xomo
Logan Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 7:50 AM
My thanks for your compliments, Mo.
Lawless Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:04 PM
...clean up on aisle six.....beautifully done Jenna, the detritus of life and love harbored in the recesses of our heart and soul
Logan Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Thanks ever so much for liking this one, John. Those broken bits and pieces remain lodged inside our hearts.
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Wow, Jenna. This is precious. Sometimes I think, though, this is true of all of us poets. Beyond our scribblings one must look into the debris left behind, a result of failing loves. You sure can write!
Logan Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 1:10 PM
That is true of me, Milt. I have so many poems that I just could not share with anyone because they are much too intimate, and not in a sexual way. Thank you for such a compliment to my writing. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:40 AM
We each are a book in the great book of life. Nice one, Jenna!
Logan Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:45 AM
We definitely are, Kim. No two pages are ever the duplicate of another. Thanks so much.
M  Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Wow Jenna….that is absolutely beautiful. Debx
Logan Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:44 AM
I'm deeply grateful for your reaction to these lines. Thanks, Deb.
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