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Loves Contradiction

Be near me without being too close Walk with me just don’t hold my hand Give me peace but not silence Listen to my feelings that I cant express Lets make love relieve my lust Always be loyal without my trust

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Silent One

Date: 2/8/2018 4:40:00 PM

This is actually brilliant..

Laura Hay
Date: 2/26/2018 8:12:00 AM

Thank you very much SO!!! warm regards, Laura.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/8/2018 9:17:00 AM

Sometimes love can be contradictory; I've know people like this but I never thought of it this way. Nicely written Laura. John

Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2018 8:38:00 AM

I think love and the practicalities of life are factors of these contradictions. Thanks for taking the time to stop by. Kind regards, Laura.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2018 8:09:00 AM

These 'contradictions' make a lot of sense, Laura. Love can't be kept imprisoned behind bars. It can be willingly given and shared without 'choking' it. ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2018 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Paul, love and freedom should go hand in hand. Kind regards, Laura