Loves Contradiction

Be near me without being too close
Walk with me just don’t hold my hand
Give me peace but not silence
Listen to my feelings that I cant express
Lets make love relieve my lust
Always be loyal without my trust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 8, 2018 at 4:40 PM
This is actually brilliant..
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February 26, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Thank you very much SO!!! warm regards, Laura.
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February 8, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Sometimes love can be contradictory; I've know people like this but I never thought of it this way. Nicely written Laura. John
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February 11, 2018 at 8:38 AM
I think love and the practicalities of life are factors of these contradictions. Thanks for taking the time to stop by. Kind regards, Laura.
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February 8, 2018 at 8:09 AM
These 'contradictions' make a lot of sense, Laura. Love can't be kept imprisoned behind bars. It can be willingly given and shared without 'choking' it. ~ Warm regards // paul
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February 11, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thanks for stopping by Paul, love and freedom should go hand in hand. Kind regards, Laura
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