Love's Brittle Bone Syndrome

Often we say the most lovable things to each other
But often we lie
We speak for the moment 
And fall victim to Reality 

Love’s brittle bone syndrome
The plated chrome covers the real issue
Because too little has been refined by the fire
In order to show the standard of gold in our hearts

Fear takes the loveable things that were said
And shows its weakness because 
Words mean nothing without action
A fraction of our mind wonders about the accuracy of love
And the reality that echoes the true meaning behind our actions.

Often we say the most lovable things to each other
But often we lie because
Often we are in love with the process—
The process of falling in love and not 
The circular nature of Love and so 
We fall victim to love’s brittle bone syndrome

Mark Frank

Copyright 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rhymer Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Love is circular in nature .If true it would consume us if occasionally we did not step back to be renewed.I have made the loop from I love you to the depths to the very sight of of the once beloved sickens only to find my way back to love.Your speaking of brittle bones syndrome to me is a love with no foundation,built upon the illusion of the process as you said or the self betrayal of buying a bill of goods only to find it was truely a pig in a poke.Enjoyed.
Frank Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Hi Vickey...thank you for your words which carry a great sense of truth. Experiencing love's brittle bone syndrome I have face it first hand and the reality of it. Thanks.
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