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Love's Brevity

In the blink of an eye, and the kink of a stye, or the filibustering sigh of a speaker, the clock rolls its hands to the sounds of big bands, as the hand of time grows weaker Levity/ brevity merge into one, storm’s darkening clouds; sun’s briefly shone; We really must hurry, just don’t have the time, for kissing and cooing, or a sweet sixty nine. Pull back the sheets quickly, clothes we’ll keep on; the missionary position, can be quite fun. But do keep it short, best not drag it out; the quicker we cum, the sooner we’re out! 100 wds Written for Brevity contest 7/7/15

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Date: 7/15/2015 10:32:00 PM
Well done, Peter, not unexpected. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/15/2015 1:43:00 AM
Peter, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:09:00 AM
Peter, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:35:00 PM
a saucy write Peter congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 8:47:00 AM
I hope there was no short comings in the sack, your love's brevity brought a smile to my face, grats on your win ;)
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:22:00 AM
A jaunty little romp, Peter, in a saucy Bamforth seaside postcard sort of way. As for brevity in lovemaking, I was once asked if I made love to music. I said yes, we did it to the Greenwich time signal. And I was normally having a cigarette by the fourth pip. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 7/7/2015 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Viv..your critique much appreciated as always...Peter

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