Kayod5 Kayode Poet Sonnet

Loves Brake

LOVE’S  BRAKE               

Many are  by the night mice,
They eat you quietly like lice
Their pretence is just to  entice ...
They are by no means really nice

The farmer’s love for his hens:
Every time in and out the pens;
So often he bakes with their eggs
His pet feeds daily on their legs.

Hold the brake when you hear love,
He may sing songs, she may with you laugh;
The agenda for you can be rough and tough:
Though it looks a sheep,it can still be a wolf.

Calamity hides its dagger under  tongue and face;
So many have become its preys without any trace.


User's name : Kayod5
Contest        : Impress me with small poem 11
Motiff           : Philosophic
Sponsor       : Giorgio V.

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Gautami Phookan March 8, 2014 at 5:49 AM Congrats on your win Kayode, liked how you wrote this. Nice!

Kelly Deschler March 7, 2014 at 1:41 PM Very good advice, Kayode. Everyone should think twice before falling in love. Even though it's difficult to remember that in the moment! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair March 7, 2014 at 1:21 AM Impressive. Congrats on the win!!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2014 at 8:58 PM hey, I am seeing this one again on the winner's list this time. BIG congrats, my friend.

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2014 at 8:10 AM I'm impressed as well, congratulations.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole March 5, 2014 at 12:53 PM Superb bro!! Congrats on the win!!! Very philosophical!!!

Sandip Goswami March 5, 2014 at 8:28 AM Super . It is proved that now love is madness , selfishness ...Truly I am speechless dear ...Best wishes from India ..

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2014 at 7:08 AM - Hello Kayod5, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta March 5, 2014 at 5:33 AM Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, kayod5

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2014 at 8:02 PM ok, I read what you said to me down here and now I get it. I did not know Val meant Valentines!! It's also short for the name Valarie! You could call it Love's brake too! Kayod5 Kayode February 8, 2014 at 8:15 PM Thank you Andrea for your time and suggestion; may the lord reward you in folds.

Shadow Hamilton February 8, 2014 at 10:17 AM Kayod5 good pen hugs Kayod5 Kayode February 8, 2014 at 10:22 AM Thank you Shadow, if Shadow said good then it must be good.

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2014 at 9:37 PM Yes, I really get this one. it is full of wisdom. Why do you call it Val's brake? Kayod5 Kayode February 8, 2014 at 12:39 AM Thank you Andrea, I call it Val's brake because it is meant to caution people that may be carried away with the idea of valentines to love with moderation; just like a reckless driver on highway needs his brake for the avoidance of accident. Any better idea Andrea? I will be glad to learn from you again.

Sara Kendrick February 7, 2014 at 1:54 PM I like the play on good and evil so to speak..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments inspire me..Sara Kayod5 Kayode February 7, 2014 at 2:04 PM Thank you Sara,have a wonderful weekend.

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2014 at 10:36 AM very insightful read making this page jump with your edgy, delightful images, kayods... fine stufff!.. huggs Kayod5 Kayode February 7, 2014 at 10:50 AM Thank very much nette, have a wonderful weekend and may the Lord of hosts protect you and all that is yours from recent ocean upsurge in Philippines.

Russell Sivey February 7, 2014 at 8:25 AM This is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a terrific piece, such a tremendous poem, Great Work!! Kayod5 Kayode February 7, 2014 at 9:54 AM Thank you for your reading and comment good Russell.Have lovely weekend.