Loves Beating Hearts

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Love can be as a haunting sometimes; ghostly

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Although, beyond the colder corridore...

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Soaring through the veins of beauties life; its wamth 

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To burn this mark so deep inside a breath 

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Within the raptures taste, from its perfect lips...

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..."In, Loves Beating Hearts" *






*Note: Inspired in the round-a-bout by, “Beautiful Linda Marie.”
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Kendrick Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:46 PM
If for a contest, good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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December 5, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Good Luck on Contest.. May God be with you
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May 16, 2011 at 5:30 PM
That was some comment on my poem lol Great poem
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May 13, 2011 at 4:09 PM
that is so beautiful, wow, and thank you for your comments...
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