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Loves Beating Hearts

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Love can be as a haunting sometimes; ghostly * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Although, beyond the colder corridore... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Soaring through the veins of beauties life; its wamth * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * To burn this mark so deep inside a breath * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Within the raptures taste, from its perfect lips... * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ..."In, Loves Beating Hearts" * *Note: Inspired in the round-a-bout by, “Beautiful Linda Marie.”

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Date: 5/27/2011 12:46:00 PM
If for a contest, good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2011 5:55:00 PM
Good Luck on Contest.. May God be with you
Date: 5/16/2011 5:30:00 PM
That was some comment on my poem lol Great poem
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Date: 5/13/2011 4:09:00 PM
that is so beautiful, wow, and thank you for your comments...
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