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Love's Back In Season

Rendering facts to black and white
leaves little room for shades of gray.
And stubbornness leads to a fight;
when neither of us will give way.

As shouts instigate a ruckus,
anger regurgitates stale lies.
And when patience abandons us,
we don't hold back till someone cries.

Feelings flare under verbal fire;
fueled by harsh looks that could kill.
And there's no escaping our ire;
streaming tears start flowing at will.

Yet, regretting slurs hurled in rage;
time silently restores reason.
And we start acting more our age;
confirming, love's back in season.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2018 1:35:00 PM

Great poem about drama, drama, drama!

John Lawless

Date: 3/14/2017 9:15:00 AM

Ah, yes, Emile, the seasons of love can change very suddenly and abruptly....But Summer....AH....sweet steamy summer....nice little metaphor in the last couplet....congrats on your placement.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thanks John, for your friendly comments and words of encouragement. Emile.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/13/2017 10:16:00 PM

The most sincere love can be make up love, congratulations Emile...

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2017 8:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie, your comments are most appreciated, Emile.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 10:01:00 AM

But after a well like hot lava we must let off this emotional steam that's build up inside, thats the boom effect. I love how you've expressed it so well in this poem, well done. I love the way poetry can't allow the writer to just vent and you can express all your inner thoughts and emotions, cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 9:59:00 AM

Dear Emile, Life in itself is a constant struggle, conflict between personalities and situations, can cause us to act out, to vent emotions that we keep deeply within ourselves. Humans are living volcanoes, exploding that the height of pressures build up, it's not that we don't love one another but it's the factor that we do love one another and don't wish to hurt each other, so we let things that hurt or eritact each other to pass away or we shove it down without menitioning it out loud.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/9/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thanks so much for taking the time to give me this personal and in depth review, I appreciate and am flattered by your words. Emile.

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/8/2015 8:27:00 PM

Such a true write. Been there ,done that long ago. Deep passion so often allows for deep anger when one feels wronged or ignored. Great and creative write my friend! A 7 and certainly reminds me of my two ex-wives. lol

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/9/2015 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Robert, for your friendly words of encouragement. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 7:46:00 PM

Where there is passion there is bound to be disagreements which make life interesting and electric. You could be describing my husband and myself in this creative write Emile. Passion and time always wins out! 7

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/8/2015 8:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie. Emile.