Lover's Tiff (Her Reply)

I told you that it will never work
I'm not willing to loose everything you berk
Eventually, someone will tell our loved ones
Then all we had will be destroyed and we’ll be undone

How could you say I’m seeing others, I’m alone
Come ant time to the house, I’m always at home
I have no one else, how could you accuse me
It is you I want and to see

I can’t leave him no matter what 
Don’t make me out to be some kind of tart
By the way at the time your son was nasty to mine
I couldn’t ignore it, it was not fine

Meeting with kids will only draw unwanted attention
And I don’t want you or me to loose everything you mentioned
I do love you but no longer say so
Because we cannot be together and this you know

Please don’t do anything to spoil it
We are friends and that’s our secret treat
I don’t want to give anyone the impression that something went on
We got together and to them they might see it all wrong

I know we are friends but we can never meet
Whether in the open or being discrete
Questions were asked about what we do together before
I can’t handle the inquisition anymore

So sorry this has to be the end
Remember, I will always be your loving good friend
Goodbye….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/26/2010 2:23:00 PM
Hi . The b.....ad woman. How can she not see your love for her. Never mind write up a proper lady. Cheers eamon
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:31:00 AM
Heart wrenching poem... redirect the energy!
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