Lovers Quarrel

Venom dripping from thoughtless words
all thoughts gone but "This is absurd"
watching dribbles of rain
slide down old window panes
with a turn, theres nothing to be heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 23, 2015 at 3:29 PM
Hi Misty: Beautiful metaphoric prose. I especially loved, "Venom dripping from thoughtless words in which most quarrels are.
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