Lover's Quarrel

As they walked the moonlit beach in silence, their aching hearts split worlds apart, they were joined by their shadowed silhouettes, which, connected, danced along… Forms united clear and strong, Gave them counsel in their night. © Sandra M. Haight 2014 All Rights Reserved ~5th Place~ November 10, 2014 Contest: Silhouette of a Heptagonet – Silhouettes of Night Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Catching up on reading all the wonderful winners on this list. I love yours, Sandra! The best part of the quarrel is the making up...congrats!
Haight Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:03 PM
Hi Rhonda, thanks again for your nice comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:58 PM
I love this. Been there in those lonely moments - together as our spirits danced upon the heated moment.
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Hi John, so nice of you to stop by with your nice comment. Yes, my being there too inspired the poem. Thanks! Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Thanks so much, Brenda. Hugs, Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 5:18 PM
beautiful song of anger then reconciliation...thank you for joining my contest and big congrats, sandra.. hugggs
Haight Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, Nette. It was a pleasure to enter your contest and to be placed on your winner's list. Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:37 AM
beautiful imagery Sandra many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
Haight Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Jan, thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats. You are very supportive, and I appreciated that. Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:33 AM
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Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Very mysterious Sandra. The shadows connected yet they were worlds apart. Nice one. 7+Fav.
Haight Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Thanks so much, Brenda. I really liked your theme so much!! Hugs, Sandra
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