LOVERs LAGOON

segment of the sun lemandarin, semi-black ‘midst toasty branches floats flamingos, flaming pink in lagoon’s brackish parquet
*hybrid between mandarin orange and lemon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 6:12 AM
- Lovely range of colours ... love the poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Brotherton Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 5:35 AM
Your words create an impressive display of warmth, my friend. Makes me want a margarita or two.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Cheers! :)
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 4:30 AM
Ahh!! So colorfully descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Cunningham Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 1:10 AM
Quite a colourful image you've created in your verse Kim. Roll on summer. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Thank you! Hope it hs curative properties that warm your heart, Tom.
Wolf Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:19 PM
With all those dazzling images, I wonder how our lovers can focus on love. ~ Easily distracted
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:40 PM
LOL
Hind Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Very warm and 'toasty' for this type of year! Enjoyed!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Thank you, Paige!
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