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LOVERs LAGOON

segment of the sun lemandarin, semi-black ‘midst toasty branches floats flamingos, flaming pink in lagoon’s brackish parquet
*hybrid between mandarin orange and lemon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/28/2023 3:44:00 PM
a colorful, almost magical poem filled with warmth and pleasant images. I appreciate you and your words. Have a great evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 6:43:00 PM
As I appreciate yours! So busy…doing what I can do to read. Thanks so much! <3
Date: 11/28/2023 6:12:00 AM
- Lovely range of colours ... love the poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/28/2023 5:35:00 AM
Your words create an impressive display of warmth, my friend. Makes me want a margarita or two.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 7:08:00 AM
Cheers! :)
Date: 11/28/2023 4:30:00 AM
Ahh!! So colorfully descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara!
Date: 11/28/2023 1:10:00 AM
Quite a colourful image you've created in your verse Kim. Roll on summer. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thank you! Hope it hs curative properties that warm your heart, Tom.
Date: 11/27/2023 7:19:00 PM
With all those dazzling images, I wonder how our lovers can focus on love. ~ Easily distracted
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2023 7:40:00 PM
LOL
Date: 11/27/2023 6:47:00 PM
Very warm and 'toasty' for this type of year! Enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2023 7:40:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!

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