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11 syllables each line

6 lines

short poem written on 22/06/2024

Line Gauthier sponsored

bite size poem 86th contest

 

I sent her a kiss on a piece of paper, that is all I had from back of a wrapper, she sent me in love a lock of her black hair, with a note that read ‘this is all I can share” we two jews died in the concentration camp, our love still glows from the cemetery lamp.

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Date: 8/13/2024 7:46:00 AM
moving ~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/13/2024 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Line!:)
Date: 7/29/2024 1:23:00 AM
Amazing, congratulations
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/13/2024 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 7/29/2024 1:08:00 AM
amazing. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/1/2024 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!:)
Date: 6/23/2024 6:58:00 PM
packed with deep sentiments, Krish...grreat pen!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/23/2024 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Nette! pleased you like it!
Date: 6/23/2024 9:51:00 AM
Sad one. But we can never forget what they endured
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/23/2024 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Sad chapters in our history repeated and played by different people! We never seem to learn!
Date: 6/23/2024 6:46:00 AM
So desperately sad and inspiring that love conquers all! Good luck in the contest.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/23/2024 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Karen! Many such stories have gone unnoticed.

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